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i've decided to upload some of the art jam pieces that i've been doing on the VOIDforum since 2006. i'll only upload a few a day, so it won't overwhelm people too much (there are a LOT) XD and most liekly most of these will later end up in my scraps. so, enjoy the big upload of art while you can! ;3
jam was originally made by *angieness. i had a lot of fun with this one, and i really like how seel looks older (basically, just make your character old. from just a few years to....many many years) XD in this image seel is anywhere from 40-60 years old. i can't imagine her image changing too much, aside from adding wrinkles and lines. gave her some glasses because her eyesight is pretty bad (she is a canine after all), and as she gets older it just gets worse. also figured she'd still be fighting and kicking ass even when she's a rickety old lady, so i gave her lots of battle scars to show it CommentsStill think this is major kickassery. Seel looks alot wiser, here.
-- I dare you. Can you say it? [link] wow xD
I think you did a great job making her look older but not look grotesque like a lot of people do. If I had one criticism, just to keep up with the "advanced critique encouraged," I'd say that the scars would look more convincing if the outline interacted a little more with them, maybe bumping out or sinking in where the fur didn't grow back over the scar. really though, -- I hear it's amazing when the famous purple stuffed worm in flap-jaw space with a tuning fork does a raw blink on Hara-Kiri rock! I need scissors! Sixty-one! GRANDMA SEELY! Don't steal her dentures!
-- "If you poke it and it goes "WAH," you'll want to poke it again." -=Kraden She's actually very charming as an older woman. She has that kind of all knowing look that I really enjoy in people's characters when they draw them older.
The wear and tear on her collar is a great little detail, it's very simple but helps to get you to realize it's old. Lovin' her wild hair by the way :3 ahahah yeah the scars were just......ech XD for some reason i've been looking at a lot of "noob" art lately, and i actually really love that flat scar look, so that's what i did for this one...
don't be afraid to crit more! -- sign up here for free video games: [link] yeah, i s'pose it does seem to lessen the brutality of it, to have the markings but not the indication of mutilation (that rhymes!)
*ponder* ah, i feel bad critiquing speaking of gelatinous, i ate a block of jello today and i thought of you xD -- I hear it's amazing when the famous purple stuffed worm in flap-jaw space with a tuning fork does a raw blink on Hara-Kiri rock! I need scissors! Sixty-one! |
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